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Bring Down Your Wall
Contributed by
kayald
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:37:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Bring down your wall
Let me know who you are
Let me have a first row view
To your soul in depths so far
Help me bring down
Your wall
Your barrier
Your shield
There must be something deeper
There must be something real.
Hiding in walls of
Stone
Brick
Steel
Let me see who you are
Let me know how you truly feel
Relase yourself from the shadows
That you formed to hide
Forced by others who think its wrong
For a man to feel inside
Men are
Strong
Steady
Hard
They aren't supposed to tell
What they think behind their walls
The thoughts they know all too well
Bring down your wall
I won't tell a single soul
Let me see your true self
Yourself reflected whole.
I can't be the only one
Who can whine and complain
I want us to be equal--
Let me see your pain.
I won't laugh, and I won't scorn
I just want to see you completely
Don't tell me there's nothing there,
I know there's something hidden deeply.
I want to love all of you
But if you won't let me in,
Then how can i know if this is real
Or where our link begins
Bring down your walls,
Rejoice when they finally crack
Recall inner pain and hurt
And those times you want to go back
Stop your enigma and tell the truth
What have you to lose?
The image conceived by others
Can only merely bruise.
I can only love you more
If you tell me it all
Come and join in celebration
And watch your false walls fall.
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-02-23 22:37:47]
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Re: Bring Down Your Wall
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by crimsondream on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:09:56 AM AEST
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| eee wow i really like it! how true is that though, about men. man its hard to live with things that dont show anything eh? well i think its awesome, i love how your talking about hiding emotion, yet its so strong here. good show! |
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Re: Bring Down Your Wall
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by hidden_dezires on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:26:30 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, what can i say...i loved it ...every single line..you have quite a talent there...maybe one day i will get there...hd |
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