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Through my eyes.............
Contributed by
bychristimsaved
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:21:38 PM in AEST
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I see love through the eyes of annoyance
What purpose is it truly serving?
Love is frustrating and is only causing me pain
I see relationships through the eyes of perplexity
Why am I so connected to you when it will never last?
Relationships are confusing and are only causing me impatience
I see our future through the eyes of fear
Where are we going to end up?
Our future is scary and will only cause me sorrow
I see you through the eyes of false perception
Who is the real person I’m falling in love with?
You are deceiving and will only cause me loneliness
I see love, relationships, our future, and you through the eyes of Christ
Why do I worry when I know my heart is protected?
Love, relationships, our future, and you are beautiful and will only cause me joy indefinitely
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Re: Through my eyes.............
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by skelington on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:29:50 PM AEST
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| I think its a good piece, I too am going through this type of relationship so I kno what you r going through. I like how you talk about religion and faith, for that is all that is actually true in the world today. I also like the fact that you say this in the presence of seeing throught the "eyes" of different things. It makes it very significant. but all in all a good piece of literature.. keep writing |
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Re: Through my eyes.............
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by uchendu on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:32:24 AM AEST
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| Doing what life is to you in poetry is fun and good... you are doing this life thing into a poetic form.. and you have a way with words that i love.. this piece is good. |
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Re: Through my eyes.............
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by misheleluv on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:39:31 AM AEST
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I liked this, at first it seems your problems are due to a lack of faith, yet, in the conclusion
you place all of those doubts in the hands of faith....
I believe everyone is hesitant when falling in love at first, for fear of being hurt;
but if we don't take chances ~ jump off the edge ~ we accomplish nothing...
I could truely relate to this piece...
nice work!
Michelle |
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