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A Dream
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 10:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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An incredible dream
I didn’t want to awake
So real it did seem
All night, I wanted it to take
Never will I forget
The smell, the touch, the taste
An incredible intimacy
Love without haste
The funny thing is
When it comes to dreams
Where reality exists
They cannot, it seems
My hands are shaking
And I can’t breathe
The cold and the dark
Slowly consume me
The scariest of all
Dreams we hope won’t last
Things we don’t wish to recall
Maybe things from the past
It seems they’re capable
Where dreams fail miserably
Nightmares are able
To coexist with reality
One day I hope
To prove myself wrong
With life I must cope
Breath to breath, I go on
I want the dream
I want to smile
No more extremes
Or changing from mile to mile
I want to know
The pain can be left behind
Never again will it show
With me, no longer entwined
Is it possible?
Will I ever know?
Life, more than a shamble?
I, will make it so!
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2004-02-23 22:04:34]
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Re: A Dream
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:38:10 AM AEST
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Great write and optimism!
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Re: A Dream
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:23:47 AM AEST
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| Some people with vision, turn dreams into reality. Some people with doubt and insecurities turn nightmares into reality. Why don't you start with a vision? |
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