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Rafferty Rain
Contributed by
Karyelle
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:44:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Rafferty Rain is floating and insane.
Because her sister is to blame.
Their relationship has never been the same.
Her sister has never came,to apologize,follow her spirit which is wise.
It's the end of the day and she must close her eyes.
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Karyelle
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2004-02-23 20:44:50]
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Re: Rafferty Rain
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 09:04:41 PM AEST
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nice..... Gives you just a taste of the situation. Doesn't over explain and kill the plot. Tasteful.
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Re: Rafferty Rain
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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I like it, too, but I could use a little more info. OK, it leaves me wanting more. I think that is a good thing.
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