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hiding
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:18:03 PM in AEST
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my mind speaks and the world grows black.
but the will to save myself is what i lack.
hiding inside are the cries from my soul.
lacking the strength to create a hole.
to slip through the wall of anger.
the wall of pain, and the wall of rage.
trapped inside, hiding in it's cage.
my position so clear, i'm losing this fight,
I stand no chance, though i might.
the glimmer of light, that are these cries.
scream to me, telling me to reach deep inside.
to unleash them from deep within, to unleash them,
to purge myself of sin.
Though it sounds so easy, I assure you it is not,
after each passing day my soul does rot.
hiding everything inside is what i do, it kills my mind,
and my body to.
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2004-02-23 20:18:03]
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Re: hiding
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:28:11 PM AEST
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You've definitely got a point-- I'm an expert at hiding like that, and I'm not proud of it. Every day it kills me more and more as well.....
A very well done write.
God bless,
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Re: hiding
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 12:11:12 AM AEST
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You touched a subject that affects many, Hope all goes well for you and life gives you a better deal than what its dished out so far.
Take care of self, it can only get better, either that or Im barking up the wrong tree.
It was a beautiful write full of ryme and flow, at least you can tell your self you are an excellent writer. |
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