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Tie You Up In Dreams
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:36:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish I could tie you up in dreams
With the threads of all my seams
Show you how it feels to want to die
And fly with you so very, very high
I wish you could see this through my eyes
All the stars in all the skies
Couldn't give me reason to live now
I want to stay with you but I can't imagine how
If I could I'd drown you in my tears
Take us both away from here
I would suffocate you with my love
Leave behind the coarse fabric I'm made of
If I could I'd unravel my soul
Set it free to make it whole
There's nothing left for me in this void
I feel I've reached the end and now my will is devoid
Would you come with me to paradise?
I can help you pay the price
Give my own to make your life worth more
I'll build a bridge to lead you to the door
If you don't follow, I'll wait for you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
I'll never wander too far away
I'll always be with you, whatever comes, there's a way
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-02-23 18:36:34]
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:45:18 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write Moonlit... very original |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:03:48 PM AEST
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| This poem gave me a feeling of warmth inside. It was beautiful and it flowed, I never wanted it to end. Excellent write. Kie |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:32:32 PM AEST
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I loved the first verse so well!
I loved it all,Great poem so beautifully done! Christina |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:48:58 PM AEST
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What a great poem moonlit, i wanted to read more and more of it so i read it like 5 times, i loved the structure and i love the rhyme scheme a very original and expert piece
Luke |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:28:58 AM AEST
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| WOW dee very good! I hope the very best for you! |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:07:21 AM AEST
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Very nice.
Loved it.
I could just feel the words flow... |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by Emmie74 on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:15:39 AM AEST
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Wow, there's a lot of imagery in there, and it flows very nicely.
I like it very much :) |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:20:51 AM AEST
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| Great job. You have a very decent mastery of the English language. Great rhyme. And a beautiful theme. Keep it up. |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:47:48 AM AEST
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| awww sweet!!! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:25:19 AM AEST
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With all my heart I hope your Love follows you. You're worth it. True love, you posess. May true love hold you always in its embrace.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Tie You Up In Dreams
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:17:19 PM AEST
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God, D.... I'm crying. With your soul, for your sanity. Know that I love you with all my being, and that if I could be closer to you now, I would leap the bounds and jump to you. I am always with you. And your always in my thoughts. I know you can get through this, your so much stronger than me.
And by the way, a beautiful poem, and I, too, love the images.
Jaime |
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