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LIFE COLORS:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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pale blue
yet so true.
all i want is to hold you.
pink and red
go to bed,
i will meet you there instead.
black and white
have a good night,
tomarrow we will finish this fight.
yellow is gold
don't sell your soul,
life is not about your goal.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-02-23 17:49:03]
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Re: LIFE COLORS:
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:14:46 PM AEST
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| The way you correlated colour, situation and emotion in a flowing, progressive mood is really good - very good, infact. Nice work! |
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Re: LIFE COLORS:
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:54:16 PM AEST
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| Your poem made me smile. Very well written. Kie |
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