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Meaningless Life Of Depression

Contributed by Empty_Soul on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:36:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



It pulls me apart
It pushes me inside
I cannot hide my pains disguise
From your eternal eyes

I know not why i feel this way
Or why it torments me each day
Anger strikes at nothing and all
And now my soul begins to fall


My head splinters, my thoughts tumble
Sanity's walls, they start to crumble
By now my mind is like a drill
Hammering away, I think i'm ill

My disease may spread, you never know
Oh how I wish that I could just go
To the place of that eternal rest
This is how it feels to be depressed




Copyright © Empty_Soul ... [ 2004-02-23 17:36:09]
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Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:41:54 PM AEST
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thats sad. but also very good. it had a nice flow to it. good work keep it up.
Arden


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:45:20 PM AEST
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very good...


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:49:49 PM AEST
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Oooooh, I like this one . . . fantastic imagery, you're painting a very vivid picture here . . . this is nice. Just one thing-- (sorry!) I think, compared to the rest of this great piece, the last line is a little weak to end on. But hey, that's just me. And my sympathies 'bout depression/bad moods.

Again, nicely done.

--Nora


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:55:12 PM AEST
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WE ALL FEEL THIS WAY AT LEAST ONCE IN A WHILE(SOME MORE),& IT SUCKS! AT LEAST YOU GOT THE WILL & COURAGE TO SEE IT AS WELL AS SHOW IT!! NEVER.....
SURRENDER,OR THIS SH#T WILL WIN!!! OH,& BY THE WAY-YOUR POEM RULES!!!!
DAN!!!!!


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:16:26 PM AEST
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I liked all the feeling in it and I know what your talking about. Very nice imagery. Things should get better sometime. Best of luck to you.


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:46:09 AM AEST
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Beautifully written!! Reminds me of a friend of mine who's going thru depression as well! But the thing is how she' coping with it.
Keep up the good work!!
~Donna~


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 12:00:56 PM AEST
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Nice write dude loved the flow and rhyme kno exactly how you feel sometimes

Luke


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:50:37 PM AEST
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really like it, and can relate very much so.


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:40:18 AM AEST
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Geez right now I'm really into this poem! It describes exactly how I feel, its so expressive and tranfers emotions. This poem's really great. You're a great poet and it isn't the ammount of poems or the frequency you post its the content and this one's really shattering. Amazing write Keep it up! And wishes for the best
Anne :)


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentPwn on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:06:05 AM AEST
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Great write.


Re: Meaningless Life Of Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:23:52 PM AEST
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Can relate.. This was written very well. Depression's a Bit*h and it kills....

take care
christina




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