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just smile
Contributed by
SAT
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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why cant you just smile
like a warm summers day
when i need cheering up
or if a friend has fallen down
and cant get up on their own
why cant you just laugh
like an old car on a cold day
or when a joke cant be helped
or when my cat meows too loud
in the middle of your favorite movie
why cant you just be kind
like a cuddly kitten in my arms
or when i need someone to talk to
when i get into trouble and I am stuck
why aren't you there for me
you are my dad aren't you?
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2004-02-23 16:29:29]
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Re: just smile
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:43:24 PM AEST
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| aww... beautiful poem. I hope you show it to him. |
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Re: just smile
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:15:04 AM AEST
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| Your poem touched me deeply and brought tears to my eyes. I can hear your heart crying out. I hope you show this to him as well. Thank you so much for sharing a very moving poem. Kie |
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