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welcome
Contributed by
LOST_KIDD
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:10:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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"Welcome". Come hear let me show you! The world, don't be shy lil girl. It will all make since in time "maybe" but for now just pay me and i will give you what you want. What is it. Is that What you say well it is what makes the sun get throught the day.Well lel me show you. It is here. In the eyes of the beholder. what you can not see just look closer.
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Re: welcome
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:12:12 PM AEST
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| Very well done! |
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Re: welcome
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by Shadow on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:15:37 PM AEST
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| You have to look for the meaning. I liked it in that since. The format was ok. I'm not use to it but it was pretty good. There was some emotion but i would like to see more. Don't take what i say wrong. I realy like it. But hey if i don't give my opinion then what use is my comment? |
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