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See you in Hell
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:26:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The way this is going
there'll be one less half-breed
no friends, uncared for
and it's obvoius i'm unwanted
so why stick around and suffer
This realm
will be forgotten
these bodies break,
burn, and bleed so easily
but my soul shall live on
and my body will pass away from this realm
See you in Hell
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Re: See you in Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:38:27 PM AEST
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| This is really good! good job! |
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Re: See you in Hell
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:39:56 PM AEST
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| Applause... great job... it doesnt have alot of words that make you think of more than one meaning and takes forever to understand that one thing but your words have forever to understand... if that makes since to you at all.. |
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Re: See you in Hell
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:57:53 AM AEST
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| This isn't hell? I thought I was already there. I was about to say please can we detour to another site? I've had alot of the same thoughts you have had. I'm a mixture of a bunch of breeds myself. Hang in there with the rest of us. I enjoyed reading this poem alot. Kie |
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