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Leave No More
Contributed by
skelington
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:45:34 PM in AEST
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Any day now.
There will be a time for me to go. This day is unlike all others, lived with tears. Any other day, you would forget, but that day, etched in mind. Forget all I've left behind, But I learn that that is my life, and I musn't leave. All those I love and care for, I've left once, I leave no more. Sitting back, behind a cigarette of hopes and dreams. I snuff it out to forget my means of a childish life to the one I live now, for the "man" I've becomeis civilized and loving, but still the same as always, trust me when I say this to you all, I leave no more.
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Re: Leave No More
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:06:36 PM AEST
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this is good, personally i dont like the format u wrote it in, cos it hurts my eyes, but its your choice and your allowed to do what you want with literature which is one of the greatest things.
I moved away from everyone aswell recently, so i relate to this alot, and the 'Sitting back, behind a cigarette of hopes and dreams' line is just awsome!
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Re: Leave No More
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:07:14 PM AEST
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| this is good....keep in touch! |
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