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Cut In Blood
Contributed by
Lolita
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:18:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I could offer you a rose
As a token of my love,
But with roses come thorns
That will slice and inject poison,
And cut cruel love hearts,
Drawn in seeping warm blood.
Carving patterns and words,
Etched into your pale skin,
Etched into your shallow soul.
It's just a game to you,
To play with my mind,
A twisted smile embraces you.
Howling at the full moon,
You change in the light,
I watch you transform;
A silent, sleeping beauty,
Turned into a vicious wolf,
Snarling, sneering at me.
Copyright ©
Lolita
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2004-02-23 14:18:44]
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Re: Cut In Blood
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:45:41 PM AEST
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| Good write! Becareful though...cuttin can lead to much worse things! |
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Re: Cut In Blood
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:59:12 PM AEST
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this is both vicious and beautiful.
Cut if it helps, if it doesnt
then dont,
if you think you can find away
to cope other then cutting
then dont cut |
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Re: Cut In Blood
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by Lolita on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:53:55 PM AEST
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*commenting on my own poem, o dear!*
Just so you guys know, I don't cut! I used to, when I was messed up, but I took control of my depression and sorted myself out. I just get those thoughts sometimes, and that is what the poem is about.
Thanks for reading and commenting =) |
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