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Ellyne
Contributed by
baronhawk
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:39:10 PM in AEST
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[E]nroute to reason
I was ensnared
by that lovely vision
of beauty unmarred
[L]osing all sense
of all direction
I roam the expense
of my infatuation
[L]ove was kindled
passion aflamed
my heart was ladened
with amorous acclaim
[Y]our lovely mirage
your angelic countenance
holds hostage my heart
my absolute existance
[N]ever before
in my life's experience
have I felt evermore
this whirlwind of emotions
[E]ntangled am I
in this wishful web
with no inkling why
nor any hope in my stead.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
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2004-02-23 13:39:10]
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Re: Ellyne
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by Stitch on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:44:32 PM AEST
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Many a woman would swoon to have inspired such beautiful words. Nice stuff.
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Re: Ellyne
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:41:17 PM AEST
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| Some of us never can forget or sit aside our first true love. Life does have to continue though. Lovely write. Rita |
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Re: Ellyne
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:24:09 AM AEST
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Definitely the first acrostic poem I've seen on this site. Very good. Yes, I know what you mean about first loves! I'm going through some of the sorrow now.
Keep writing.
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Re: Ellyne
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by Merry on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 02:39:42 PM AEST
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Ain't love grand!!!!
And my question would be - did she know you were infatuated with her, or were you too shy to ask her out on a date?
Wonderful poem.
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