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Emptiness
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:26:36 PM in AEST
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Emptiness as a concept
is an absence of content
a container emptied out
without recompense.
Hollowness is a heart
with no hope inside
a tirade of regrets
and bitter diatribes.
Bitterness is a man
for whom there's no turning back
caught up in events
he cannot seem to counteract.
Helpless is a soul
without direction
out of touch with the world
losing all his convictions.
Sadness is a tear
shed for many seasons
cries of fear
uttered in total silence.
Numbness is described
as a lack of sensation
a person that's deprived
of feelings and emotions.
Hopeless is a tale
of a man's misadventures
doomed to fail
in all his endeavours.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
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2004-02-23 13:26:36]
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Re: Emptiness
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:33:25 PM AEST
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| Wow this is really good! |
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Re: Emptiness
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by Stitch on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:42:43 PM AEST
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Yes, this is excellent.
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Re: Emptiness
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by Kie on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:01:04 PM AEST
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| Bravo! Oh this is beyond excellent it is perfection! Wonderful poem. Kie |
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Re: Emptiness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 04:36:36 PM AEST
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This is an empty life devoid of hope and love. Sad write but an excellent write. Hope things improve for you.
Rita |
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