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Australian Pie
Contributed by
smooshable
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:31:49 AM in AEST
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SecretLove
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A torn soul
A shattered heart
An unrequited love
The face of an angel
The spirit of an eagle
The heart of a prostitute
Dipping her finger in many proverbial male pies
I am but kidney and liver flavoured
Kept aside, hidden away until all other pastries are consumed
The sun rises
The birds sing
Frustration and angst begin to fade
Copyright ©
smooshable
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2004-02-23 08:31:49]
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Re: Australian Pie
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:36:11 AM AEST
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Wow. You're the first poet to evoke a "wow" from me in a long time. The abstract magic of this work defines it as the words of a master. This sort of poetry always endears upon me greatly, as I always wish I could write like this.
Compellingly done.
"Stress is a thing with feathers. Shoot it before it gets to you."
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Re: Australian Pie
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:19:25 PM AEST
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"I am but kidney and liver flavoured"
Probably the most harrowing lament I've heard in ages . . .
joking aside - this is rather good, and I will now go read more of your stuff, thanks.
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Re: Australian Pie
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by pixistix on
Sunday, 28th August 2011 @ 03:43:31 AM AEST
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| i seriously love this poem!(: |
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