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Stupid

Contributed by lilsk8ergurl9 on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 07:00:41 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You made it
you played it
this ***** is overrated.

caught up,
wasted
empty
and hallow.

todays *****
will just happen tomorrow.

i must be outa time,
cos you just walked away from me.

we never see eye to eye,
cos you never wanna see.

im tired of you putting your hands on me,
im tired of you hurting me.
im tired of asking myself why,
cos i dont deserve it.

a lost little soul,
that needs someone to help.
i turned to you,
and you just gave my life more hell.

now i know why,
i hate everything about you.
but i can say one thing,
i still dont miss.

Copyright © lilsk8ergurl9 ... [ 2004-02-23 07:00:41]
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Re: Stupid (User Rating: 1 )
by pixistix on Sunday, 28th August 2011 @ 03:39:00 AM AEST
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i can most defnitly see the emotion put through this poem(: its really good. but here's some advice my teacher taught me. do show not tell. like, use emotional words to show how you feel, in stead of straight up saying it. you get what im saying? like instead of sayng "i'm sad" say something that would give people the ida that your sad. like "it hurts to hide the teardrops in my eyes" obviously not the best example(: but keep upp with the writing(;

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