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Good-bye my friend
Contributed by
dark_fighter_chick
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm so tired, but i cant sleep.
I'm so sad, but i cant weep.
It's so funny, but there's no one to laugh.
Were living on what was in the past.
Afraid to say good-bye, afraid to loose,
Clinging on to what won't let me choose.
Too much dakness, deep as the night.
Our friendship was the best and only light.
Will you remember me & the things we use to do.
I can't forget the fun times i had with you.
So wait for me at the end of the road,
We'll remember everything that was told.
Tears deep in my heart come to my eyes,
But laughter comes out so i wont cry.
I can't say good-bye, it's not understood.
Cause if i say good-bye, it might be for good.
So i'll laugh for now, but inside i'll cry,
Just know that i'll miss you, so good-bye.
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Re: Good-bye my friend
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by jbrow on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:04:06 AM AEST
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| I like this one alot. its always hard to say good by. but you said it well in this write. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Good-bye my friend
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:52:17 AM AEST
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THAT'S GOT ALOT OF HEART! YOUR FRIEND MUST HAVE BEEN BLESSED TO HAVE YOU,AS VISE VERSA!! THE WAY YOU WROTE THAT JUST RIDES ON ITS OWN!!! I
LIKED IT ALOT,GREAT TALENT YOU HAVE!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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