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I want to be In Love
Contributed by
Remi
on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 01:17:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I WANT TO BE IN LOVE
Dec 9, 03
4:18 am
I want flowers and a teddy bear on valentine day I want a card and flowers on my birthday I want candle light dinner and to make love all nite, I want to dance In his arm all nite I want to walk In the park holding hands
I want to be in love
I want to be in love
I want butterfly in my stomach when I see u I just want to call your phone just to hear your voice on the answer service, I want to call just to hear your breath
I want u to come to my window under the moon; I just want u to hold me while I cry out the last 20 years of my pain
I want to be in love
I want to be in love
People are telling me I'm not missing anything but I don't see them giving it up either so there something that I'm missing, the feeling of the first time, seeing him when he make me laugh or cooking dinner for us or listen or being there, being your best friend,
That first nite when u make love that one moment of true happiness that first pleasure that first true kiss just that one moment of pleasure to be happy the heart beat faster that first high that first burst of excitement where u can't even talk or do anything but think about him all day, wonder when u get to see him to kiss him again and make your whole body shake with excitement how he make u giggle uncontrollable how u blush all day
I want to be in Love
I want to be in Love
He make u feel like u are the one, your soul mate how yall will do anything for one another it feel like obsession how lookin at his picture, make u want to cry in a good way every time u think about him, u can't even breath when u are in the same room with him feel like u gonna pass out feel sick to your stomach u can't sit still, hearing his voice make u want to cry I want to lay on his chest and listen to his heart beat for hours In on. I want to rub my hands over his body touching him over and over kissing him all over and making love non-stop by the fire, and the moon, dead in the nite ooh I want to be in love with him someday
I want to be in love
I want to be in love
Remy Maskantinio
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Remi
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Re: I want to be In Love
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:05:49 AM AEST
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| Hun dont wish your life away. I didnt have a boyfirend till the end of 03 and it is much better that i waited! You will get your love soon enough! |
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Re: I want to be In Love
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:03:15 AM AEST
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LONG & LOUD LIKE A SONG TO BE PROUD!
YOU GOT A GREAT HEART & IT KNOWS HOW TO WRITE,ESPECIALLY ABOUT THE THINGS THAT TAKE PART IN YOUR LITTLE LIFE!! PRETTY POEM!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: I want to be In Love
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:22:01 PM AEST
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| A bit long....but you captured the essence of your longings well. But in retrospect...remember the age old adage..."be careful what you wish for..." I once wished I was in love...I wanted all the things you so very craftily describe here...for lady to call my love....but I got what I wanted I fell in love...and then fell down right down to earth.....it can hurt...so beware.. |
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Re: I want to be In Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:34:16 PM AEST
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| anyone who can express their emotions so beautifuly will most certainly find love one day. Good things are worth waiting for, beleive me, I know. |
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