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Something To Hide
Contributed by
mystikalkreations
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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through all the hate
through all the lies
there was pain
there was something to hide
i blamed you
it was all your fault
now that i've come through
i realize it's only myself
it seemed like the perfect solution
leaving you all to live your great lives
all this isolation and dissolution
it seemed like the timing was right
but deep down inside i knew that i couldn't
there was something more to look for
but everyone said that i wouldn't
this just made me want to more
they think i like people to feel sorry for me
so i just make up all these lies
but they'll never know what they've done to me
or how much i've actually cried
i want to go away and finally be free
i want to know what it feels like to be free from pain
hopefully one day i'll be able to leave
and say goodbye to all the people who said just go away
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Re: Something To Hide
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by jbrow on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:21:41 PM AEST
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I like this one, because this is how I feel somtimes. I want to die, yet something keeps me going on/ to live to fight another day. good write.
p's
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Re: Something To Hide
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by fallen_eyes on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:43:25 PM AEST
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I really like your poem, its so emotional it makes it really easy to undertsnad and relate to. I think you have written a great peace.
T x |
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Re: Something To Hide
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 07:02:40 PM AEST
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| good write we all can thank God for the time we have. and hope it is a great time. mine called [Petes missing] his time was out read it and get back with me ok...Wes... |
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Re: Something To Hide
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by Kie on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 08:08:24 PM AEST
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| This poem touched my core very deeply. So much pain found within this poem. I think we all have struggled with this at some point in our lives. Don't let anyone get you to this place and keep you there. I say live life to the fullest and they'll all see what they are missing out on. Well done on this one. Kie |
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