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Lost Together
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:19:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I face the world a lie.
I'm lost yet I see.
There you are
another human like me.
Full of pain.
A menace to society.
The scars on your arm,
a mirror to mine.
The blade in your hand
beginning to shine.
The twinkle in your eye
has been left behind.
This life is a wine glass.
You've heard the faint clatter,
the tipping
the shatter.
You've felt the hitting
and have seen the pieces scatter.
I passed you again
you probably saw.
The lonely girl
beginning to fall.
The girl waiting
to hear the last call.
You didn't try to stop me,
what a surprise.
There's finally someone
who sees from the same eyes.
Who lives the same life.
Who speaks the same lies.
I glanced at your hand.
Which is now clasped around mine.
I now see the truth,
from behind the lies in which it hides.
There really isn't a meaning
to this painstaking life.
We both smile
as we pretend we can fly.
It's finally over,
this life full of lies.
At last we're through
only a little part of us dies.
Copyright ©
acidicblasphemy
... [
2004-02-22 17:19:31]
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Re: Lost Together
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 05:52:27 PM AEST
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| Very well writen! Good job! i get a good feel from this! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Lost Together
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by Always on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:39:58 AM AEST
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| Well written, but very brutal...*s*, you should make this a hip-hop song...*s* |
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Re: Lost Together
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by desire on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 06:41:14 PM AEST
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| Wow, very heartfelt..great job as always |
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