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Ripples
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 02:24:06 PM in AEST
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Ripples in the water,
It goes from clear to red,
I watch the drops fall,
As the blood spreads.
My feet in the water,
And the blade on my wrist,
I stab it in,
And begin to twist.
The blood begins to flow,
Like a river, silent and sweet,
And waterfalls down,
Where the blood and water meet.
Slowly fade the ripples,
On the waters face,
As i smoothly walk away,
Slipping my blade into its case.
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2004-02-22 14:24:06]
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Re: Ripples
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:50:40 PM AEST
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| Very well writen....sad, and painful, but well written! |
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Re: Ripples
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:36:29 PM AEST
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Discriptive,but get help !Your writing is good.
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