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Torn Cloak
Contributed by
_Nikki_
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:27:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The world is plastic.
People live in a masquerade
Kids grow up in fog and smoke.
Love is death
Murder is love.
People walk the path of a puzzle
Created by God.
Life wears a torn cloak.
Copyright ©
_Nikki_
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2004-02-22 13:27:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Torn Cloak
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:34:57 PM AEST (User
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Woah! Nikki, this is excellent stuff! You have said sooooooo much in only 8 short lines. I am VERY impressed!
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