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Cheated
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:13:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why is it the things you never thought you would miss you always do?
Like the way you could spend hours in eachothers arms and be happy, without saying a word
What happened to all the unspoken promises?
like the urge to always stay together and be forever
When did all the happiness slowly slip away?
I bet it was when the time just seemed to seperate us
Why did i not notice that things were starting to change?
probably because you hid it away from me
What was it about her that kept you a secret from me?
Don't know it happened, you were meant to be mine.
When did you ever decide to give up on our love for her?
No doubt it was when you realised you cant handle commitment
Well why did i never think about leaving you before?
Because i never wanted to before, but now times have changed
good bye
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2004-02-22 13:13:30]
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Re: Cheated
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 07:54:53 PM AEST
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Your friend will be touch, much more than i am by this write, and i am touched in way only angls and demons and possess, from the inside, once again tam your words put such delicate and unspoken situations into screams of talent and raging imagery
A great write in every sense
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Re: Cheated
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by Lolita on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:03:47 PM AEST
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| One word to sum up this poem: aww! |
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