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Tears
Contributed by
silent
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:35:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Crying is useless
What does it do
Anger as pointless
What does it achieve
Love helps to heal
But it's not what i need
For behind the wall
Is what i crave most of all
Something i know exists and is true
What i want from everyone, including you
Death, and with it a chance at the life i never had......
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silent
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2004-02-22 10:35:53]
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Re: Tears
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:47:28 AM AEST
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well done
Larry |
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Re: Tears
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by Lainda on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 11:15:16 AM AEST
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| It was a very nice poem, but the rhyming seems just a tad off. |
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