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Untitled
Contributed by
silent
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 08:35:23 AM in AEST
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If you could feel my pain,
Would you touch me again,
I think you would,
Because you could,
You enjoy seeing my tears,
They remind you of your fears,
To take them out on me,
Your daughter, let me be,
I have done nothing but love,
But you destroyed that with lust,
I needed you for strength,
You took that for pleasure,
Found strength in my torture,
You have made my bed,
In which i lie,
To cut my life,
within i cry,
For help, in madness all around,
Life drains away, happiness, i have finally found..............
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Re: Untitled
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by confused_nutter on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:54:43 AM AEST
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first of all, thanks for your comment, i enjoy getting feedback.
I couldnt take my eyes away from your poem, i can see theres a lot of thought and emotion put into this :)
David
(if u liked my poem...look for 'my love'...probably one of my better pieces) |
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Re: Untitled
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 02:53:09 PM AEST
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| wow. there is alot of emotion and feeling in that. i understand most of whats goin on in it, bcuz i've been there. My dad's dead now. He left me an my mum when i was three. i don really remeber him...afterwards life sucked. mom was depressed, drank, cried all day. Now she is married to steve, and they had twins. my mom hates me, cuz i remind her of my dad. sometimes i think i could just scream and go mad. and wonder why life totures me!? but anyways i am running on, and sayin a bunch of stuff that doesn't need to be said in a commet. but overall its a great poem, and i really like it. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:29:03 PM AEST
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This poem is searing. If this is you, you have come through something major on your journey. If it isn't, well, it's a very well-done write. Certainly moved me.
Stitch |
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