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a RUSTY razor blade
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
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Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 02:29:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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So tired so relentless so much agony to rely on so much lost....
To tired to regain what?s not there,
All I have left are pills to take my dreams and fu-fill my needs.
All the bad deeds that ive done are finally catching up to me,
No time to run no strength to yell no shoulder to really rely on or cry on,
Pillow always wet cuz of the tears that ive shed,
Every rain drop is a tear that burns my skin as it?s born.
Every word seems so wrong every touch feels like a sin.
Being me is nothing to be proud of.
Im guilty of so many things,
Im tired of fighting what?s not there n pushing what?s always been there for me.
No one knows my agony or why I cry,
Yet once I let em in they tear me like a sheet of paper waiting to be recycled and re-utilized,
Waiting for the one to make me stop hurting and looking for the better tomorrow
Waiting for the one to make me laugh.......
I guess there?s no such thing as real fear...im not scared I just doubt what I feel
Run from my problems like a coward but I have nothing to regret and nothing to lose......
IF I die tomorrow why not die today?
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Re: a RUSTY razor blade
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:31:38 AM AEST
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BECAUSE TODAY WILL SAY,TOMORROW WILL FOLLOW,& IN A WAY IT'LL PLAY,THE PART OF TAKING WHAT'S HOLLOW BY REPLACING IT WITH A SMILE INSTEAD OF SORROW! LIFE CAN SUCK,& THE REASONS ARE SOMETHING NOT EVEN WORTH A FU*K!! DON'T GIVE DOUBT THE
SATISFACTION-INSTEAD SHOW IT THAT YOU GOT REAL MAGIC!!! POETRY THAT ONLY WINNERS LIKE YOU CAN WRITE!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: a RUSTY razor blade
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:33:22 AM AEST
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| Emotion should always be let out! tears should always be let out when necessary YAZ should always know and come to me with everything. i may not be the smartest kid but i know i wanna be there for you! its not just cuz i love you! i like the poem because i write like that 2. very nice lyrics keep it real always. BRIAN G>H |
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Re: a RUSTY razor blade
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:57:55 AM AEST
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| i wrote one like this, except it's more gory....ive already submitted 3 so they wont let me put it up yet....its called with no excuse....you should read it when i up it up |
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Re: a RUSTY razor blade
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:14:08 PM AEST
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| I have felt this way many times. i write alot of my poems concerning these feelings. The feeling of not wanting to go on, being alone, misunderstood...I have spent alot of time with psykes and in mental hospitals, cuz they all thought i was crazy for SI-ing and my constant depression. But i'm not crazy, but i'm not happy. I haven't cried in a long while, cuz i have no more tears to shead. I am dry, empty, numb...well again i am running on when i am supposed to be leaving a mear commet. great poem, its one of my faves so far. |
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Re: a RUSTY razor blade
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:22:09 PM AEST
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| if you die today theres no tomorrow for me. no purple couch from a second hand store, no mickey mouse pancakes, no eyes in the bathroom, i wont have my model. i wont have nothing.......you know who i be, triple OoO butch :) i love you!!! |
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Re: a RUSTY razor blade
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by waos on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:42:15 PM AEST
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| this was really good...i love the last line. "if i die tomorrow why not die today"...that is one of the coolest things i've read in a long time. good job |
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