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Lost
Contributed by
BettieGirl
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:26:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The misery is unbearable
I can’t take it in at all
The more I want to love you
The harder I seem to fall
I want to see what you see in me
To understand why you’re still mine
But my confidence is shattered
And I can’t read between the lines
I look at myself as worthless
A pitiful excuse of a girl
A body with no soul
Two personalities, Just one girl
One which I’m proud to be
One which I’m scared to be
Not knowing which is which
Caught up in a whirlwind of thoughts
Hovering the evil switch.
Not knowing who I am anymore
Or who I was to become
I’ve given up all hopes and dreams
And do what I do best…RUN
Copyright ©
BettieGirl
... [
2004-02-22 01:26:00]
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Re: Lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by _Nikki_ on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 01:35:15 AM AEST
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| wow..i can relate to that so well..especially right now, since i feel like that..a lot of emotion in this poem...nothing else to say |
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Re: Lost
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 03:35:31 AM AEST
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RUN? HELL I THINK YOUR POETRY IS SOMETHING YOU DO MUCH BETTER! HELL,
YOU WROTE THAT REALLY NICE,A LITTLE SAD!! SO NOW YOU GOTTA THINK,WHICH SIDE OF ME IS THIS,THE ONE YOU'RE NOT LOOKING AT-YOUR HEART!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Lost
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:23:45 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem! BettieGirl u have a good talent! |
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