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Innergy
Contributed by
Karyelle
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:05:07 PM in AEST
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Energy is purely physical.
Innergy is purely mystical.
The physics of mystics go right down to metaphysics.
Like a magnet, it's static and they all say they've had it.
Riding the bar, you can reach the crater or the stars.
The negative people are just a statistic.
With your negativity, your compassion shines through.
What would I do...
Without you?
Copyright ©
Karyelle
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2004-02-21 22:05:07]
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Re: Innergy
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by Kie on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:07:58 PM AEST
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| A truly unique poem! Well done! Kie |
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Re: Innergy
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:28:12 PM AEST
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| Very nice write here, you have a way with words.keep them coming do you hear? Regards Wes,,, read one of mine, ok? |
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Re: Innergy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST
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This is a unique interpretation of such a hazy subject. I enjoyed it very much.
Welcome aboard! |
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Re: Innergy
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:27:27 AM AEST
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Like a secret message buried in a metaphysical mine.
Cute.
Stitch |
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Re: Innergy
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by spider on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:26:06 PM AEST
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| a little confusing but really nice use of language, interesting concept too |
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Re: Innergy
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by MissMandy on
Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 06:45:55 PM AEST
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this is so nerdy it's cute. :D
and i totally mean nerdy in a good way. beautiful write. |
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