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EdIciUs
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:41:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My body trembles and shakes
from with in as u touch me
your metallic kiss
lingers in my skin while I lay silent
as the light goes dim
everything’s getting blurry now
death is gaining on me
as the crimson satin blood covers my sheets
and stains my wrist
I feel free awake yet sleeping
stuck in a coffin trapped in my body
wanting to fly until I fall once again
for you metallic kiss
to grace my
snow
White
skin
Copyright ©
AmaNdAsHepArD
... [
2004-02-21 21:41:40]
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Re: EdIciUs
(User Rating: 1 )
by sickness16 on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:44:01 PM AEST
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| Good stuff! I love it! Kudos! |
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Re: EdIciUs
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:14:28 PM AEST
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| You started out in a good romance, but it turned for the worst. I hope you find the love of true lovers instead. Keep them comng. read one of mine please. Wes... |
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Re: EdIciUs
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:54:40 AM AEST
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| i think its a good poem, i love how you have used so many descriptive words. |
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