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What Happen
Contributed by
ernesto3000
on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I used to think straight.
I used to have fun.
these thoughts
never used to be there.
What happen.
my life.
My life
It used to be fun.
What happen.
my friends.
My friends
I used to have so many.
what happen to my boys.
these thoughts.
Why now?
why these thougts?
I used to have fun.
What happened.
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ernesto3000
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2004-02-21 20:32:06]
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Re: What Happen
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by Kie on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:47:11 PM AEST
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| I don't know what happened but i've been there as well! Enjoyed this one. Kie |
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Re: What Happen
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by sickness16 on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:11:34 PM AEST
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| I like the feel of how you wrote this poem. Was it on account of you being angry or does it have to do with gettin mad at a situation? |
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Re: What Happen
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 10:01:32 PM AEST
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| Those thoughts those thoughts.....keep them coming in poetry form.hear? read one of mine regards Wes... |
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