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Cold and Empty
Contributed by
Devnet
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I woke up this morning
with you in my arms
to a beautiful sunrise
You felt so warm against me
While I felt so cold inside
You help me to remember what makes me real
Pain, grief, despair, love
All dreaded emotions
I feel bereft without
Sweet kisses at sunrise
Remind me of what I will never have
No one could ever love me
No one could ever kiss me like that
Never again
I'm too cold, too detached
Every self inflicted scar
A flash of searing heat to fight the cold
A cold numbness
Could I ever feel your love?
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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| This is very sweet! |
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by Arius-Inues on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:33:49 PM AEST
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| I know what your thakin about! very well writen. |
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by Kie on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:45:06 PM AEST
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| Welcome to YPDC! Enjoyed your poem. Kie |
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:49:42 PM AEST
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Good write, I enjoyed this read. Welcome to YPDC, the best of the net.
aimie |
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by sickness16 on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:17:56 PM AEST
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| Wow, you're good! This describes me almost every morning! Keep it up! |
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:55:13 PM AEST
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| There is always a love for someone out there don't ever give up,ok? but keep those great poems a coming,ok? Oh check out one of mine please. Wes... |
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Re: Cold and Empty
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by silent on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 09:22:26 AM AEST
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| That is very well structured, keep writing you have a real talent, i enjoyed the impact that left on me. |
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