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Short and Sweet
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your love's like a pouring rain
Is driving me crazy, driving me insane
Your love's like a beautiful day
When flowers start blooming in May
Your love's like a snow in December
Is winning over me, and I have to surrender
Your love's like a warm July
Is all that I have left of what was mine
Your love is what I'm living for
Never in my life I have loved someone more.
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New_York_Chick
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2004-02-21 12:07:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Short and Sweet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:13:48 PM AEST (User
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This conveys a distinct sense of warmth, which made me smile. Good poem. |
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Re: Short and Sweet
(User Rating: 1 ) by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 03:45:31 PM AEST (User
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Your poem made me all warm in my heart,got me thinking of the one I love so much,how true your words ! Very nice !
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Re: Short and Sweet
(User Rating: 1 ) by faithmairee on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 04:18:34 PM AEST (User
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You have done an excellent job of capturing the pain of unrequited love in this sad but beautiful poem. I loved it! |
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