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Desperate for My Love
Contributed by
Ali
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Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:32:30 AM in AEST
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oops
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Hell is when I see you smile,
And long to touch your lips with mine.
Hell is when you are hurt by someone,
While I love you unconditionally.
Hell is looking into the mirror,
And seeing why you don't feel for me what I do for you.
Hell is looking into your Heavenly eye's,
And searching in vain for a love that may never exist.
I am living in Hell,
A love not returned.
Oh God, Aphrodite, Venus, Angels etc.
All the Greater beings,
Anyone who can hear me,
Feel my desperation,
I don't know who else to ask,
Calling Destiny and Fate,
I'm telling you I need to be loved.
I need his love.
Please let me get into Heaven,
Where all love should be returned.
Copyright ©
Ali
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2004-02-21 09:32:30]
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Re: Desperate for My Love
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:56:16 AM AEST
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Ah' - Unconditional love. So Godlike; and yet,- so vulnerable.
Lionel
PS. Sorry you're not feeling well. |
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Re: Desperate for My Love
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 11:15:41 AM AEST
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Unrequited love is a special hell. I do know how hard it is right now. I have been there. Believe it or not, it will pass, and God will bring the right person to you. I truly believe that.
Stitch |
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Re: Desperate for My Love
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 04:31:28 PM AEST
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| so sorry to hear you are not feeling so well...if it's any consolation i loved your poem and can relate to it...very nicely written! |
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