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Voice in My Heart
Contributed by
stalkee
on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:31:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This is not half-working,
is what I have discovered
As far as I can tell,
it's pointless to search for
My whole mind's full of something,
for me to tell you
But the voice in my heart,
can never be heard
So I continue in this game,
just going in circles
And I give in to all of those nights,
where I wanted to cry
I've finally broken down to nothing,
it's all starting to pour out
Since the voice in my heart,
can never be heard
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2004-02-21 01:31:19]
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Re: Voice in My Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:40:30 AM AEST
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| The voice in my heart is soundless too. Great poem here. |
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Re: Voice in My Heart
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by venkat on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 03:30:27 AM AEST
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I can say the poem is writen very beautifully as words are balanced with exact emotion..
I enjoyed its read..venkat |
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Re: Voice in My Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 08:40:13 PM AEST
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| Im not a writer myself although im practising. I thought this was a really good poem, one i could identify with personally 5/5. |
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