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A lie a day Keeps the cells away
Contributed by
fldadn1
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:58:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Flocks of cells
Stream down the vein
all coming and going
and starting from the same place
another lie i heard
another pound to my heart
another cell slow to start
a cold reaction
and a shiver down my spine
why the hell do you have to lie
it seems i dont care because im gone
ill never trust again
ill never love
if i had a reason
it wont be good enough
its never good enough
just to love you!
i may sound twisted
i may sound mad
because enough was enough
you seem like lifes not tough
well go ahead lie
make my life more rough
with all this stupid stuff
Copyright ©
fldadn1
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2004-02-20 19:58:29]
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Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away
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by Betterdorkthenu on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:10:40 PM AEST
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| I like your poem. It shows that you are angry, that you've been hurt. I can relate to your poem. It shows me I am not the only one out there that has been hurt. |
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Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away
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by RochelleLloyd on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 04:11:46 AM AEST
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| i've known this feeling. I like this piece. |
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Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 06:33:49 PM AEST
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| i like this poem and i think that hurt is soo much around us that its inevitable u cant stop it...........but what u can do is decide weather u make your self hurt or not |
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Re: A lie a day Keeps the cells away
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:24:34 AM AEST
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Very powerful poem. I do somethimes feel like that and it seems like the anger is unstoppable would'nt you agree? Very well done.
Keep it up!
TB |
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