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Hanged
Contributed by
fldadn1
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:55:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The time is going
the air gets cold
you breathe a dieing breath
as your insides fold
your sight gets dim
you can hardly see now
as you swing like a loose limb
how much longer till you die
how much longer till your spirits fly
as you try to lift yourself from the rope
you neck feels like it is broke
left, right, left, right,
slower and slower you begin to choke
Dead in a few second
no more hope
Just wish you had time
to say goodbye
to everyone you loved
Dead now, Cut the ropes
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2004-02-20 19:55:29]
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Re: Hanged
(User Rating: 1 )
by _Nikki_ on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:31:19 AM AEST
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| I love it. I get so many feelings just by reading it. Feels like I am the person being hanged. I love it. |
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Re: Hanged
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 06:37:12 PM AEST
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| y is it that suicide seems to be all around us....i like your poem been there and i'm still there hanging |
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