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Paralysis
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:29:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I sit here, and know not what to write
I cry here longing for someone to hold me the way you do
Nothing can hurt me if I curl up here in the dark
And I want to be alone, but I’m so afraid
I need to let go, but I can’t; I’m chained to this feeling
I’m suffocating under their watch
I can’t remember how it feels to breathe
And I want to throw up, but I’m too weak, I’ve lost all energy
I wonder at your beauty, I commit the sin of envy
And yet it hurts to be in such awe
I wish that you might understand
But love doesn’t exist, or so I’ve been told
I want for everything I can't receive
I long for love, the unconditional love I show you
I need to no longer need and obsess
But this is the way I am, and my reason for wanting the end
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2004-02-20 19:29:07]
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Re: Paralysis
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:37:17 PM AEST
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:( ok now im sad. lol this is really good but really sad. great work by a very talented poet.
Becky |
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Re: Paralysis
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 06:40:31 PM AEST
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| i liked this very descriptive and emotional sad yet understandable.........suicide can be one of the best and worst things |
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Re: Paralysis
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 06:05:36 PM AEST
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| I love you!!!!! This is such a good poem. Your really gifted dude, please dont put urself down about your writing :( |
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Re: Paralysis
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:37:59 AM AEST
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| i...god...i don't know what to say...i do love you, unconditionally, forever, i always will, i always have...i get selfish sometimes and find it hard to show you, and i'm sorry...i love you, you're beautiful and always will be xxx |
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