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she
Contributed by
mindset
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:44:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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far away was the place i travelled
in her eyes she said to me
your road is long im here to end
no more the cold will ever be
so i listened opened soul
in i wondered and she let me stay
warm the place i came to be
upon my heart she took so easy
left me there so empty and waisted
time goes on now its ended
i wonder on in a world of empty
yet i miss her in a world of plenty.
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Re: she
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:43:41 PM AEST
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Wow this excellent !What a poem filled with emotions,beauty and grace..I really really appreciated reading it !Again,excellent poem !*~1000 stars~*
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Re: she
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by mindset on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:02:09 PM AEST
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| glad you liked it......... |
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Re: she
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:37:13 PM AEST
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I did so like it !It was beautiful !
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