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Ar Goll
Contributed by
night_child
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:19:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No greater power
Then his power over her
Her heart submissive
To his touch
But now there is nothing
Only the cold hand of sadness
Of loneliness
Of death
She walks alone the river shore
Watching the water
Trying to find
To find the answers she seeks
So many questions
So few answers
The candle burns
Her grip on life
On love
Slips
The glow that once had been
Upon her pretty face
Is gone
Shadowed
But the cold stab of reality
Lost within herself
Lost within the grief
She can fight no more
Atop a mountain side she lies
Forever sleeping
Spring winds
Gentle and true
Blow across her grave
Eternally waiting
Forever remaining
Alone
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night_child
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2004-02-20 17:19:25]
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Re: Ar Goll
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:58:55 PM AEST
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| Oh this was so sad. The woman in this poem I felt for her all the way to my core. I read it several times and each time it hit me harder. I can't congratulate you enough on this poem. Kie |
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Re: Ar Goll
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:52:21 PM AEST
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The sorrow of a broken heart
Truly tears the soul apart
Very well written poem.
Take care
David |
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