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Angel's Storm
Contributed by
Lainda
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:10:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Angel’s Storm
Thrashed upon the treacherous sea
Poseidon exhausts his raging fury
White-whipped ominous waves
Hurls the hopeless vessel to its grave
Pandora’s Box’s Hope expelling
Rags clutch to the scraggy being
Blistered, pruned hands forsake
Salt-soaked eyelids willingly flake
Melodious chorus engulfs the senses
Beams of pure golden light dispenses
Ensnared within the gossamer web of song
A lone mind encased in the labyrinth throng
The heavenly echoes awaken restless souls
Imprisons weariness, throbbing aches and it dulls
Feeling weightless as down-feather clouds
Drift in absolute bliss as the fog enshrouds
Sunbeams glare through flimsy eyelids
The venture ending on a desolate island
Expanse of cerulean, where once clouds porous
Voices still resounding of your savior, the angel’s chorus
Copyright ©
Lainda
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2004-02-20 17:10:47]
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Re: Angel's Storm
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by arden on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:41:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful, good job.i look forward to more.
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Re: Angel's Storm
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:46:34 PM AEST
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| Poetry at its best! I think this is the first poem I have read by you and I can't wait for more. Kie |
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Re: Angel's Storm
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by Asatru on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:51:00 PM AEST
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| awesome - just awesome, I've nothing more to say, just a good poem. |
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Re: Angel's Storm
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:36:32 PM AEST
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After your comment on my poem 'Raptured Dreams' i just had to look at your work, and i must say i am so glad i did because this is unimaginable, i was beginning to feel just a little to wordy during the middle stanzas but then it just flew away and reached an amazing level of brilliance that i could only dream touching.
Truely a timeless piece that will be never be forgotten through the ages
Luke |
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Re: Angel's Storm
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by uchendu on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:40:38 AM AEST
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| It's great to read this.. keep up the good job.. I love this |
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