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My own little hell.
Contributed by
SAT
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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my own little hell,
killing me slowly,
devouring me into itself,
with no escape,
only to leave me alone,
with no one but myself,
sanity leaves,
and so does all life,
darkness takes over,
i am its slave,
to take life away,
and share my own little hell,
everyone must follow,
the evil is too strong,
much too strong,
and not even god himself,
can resist its calling,
and the heaven that once was there,
is not now,
it was devoured,
by my own little hell,
only to come to find,
that it was never there,
and all of gods followers,
never really existed,
and that i was the only god,
but in the form of the devil,
who says that he can't be a she,
in her own little hell.
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-02-20 16:10:09]
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Re: My own little hell.
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:24:00 PM AEST
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| This is a fabulous poem. Dark & deep and I have had some of the same thoughts at times. You placed them into poetic form and this is my favorite by you. Awesome, awesome, awesome! Kie |
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Re: My own little hell.
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:03:34 PM AEST
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i like your poem very descriptive and emotional
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Re: My own little hell.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:26:14 PM AEST
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I may not be a member here, but i read many
dark and suicide poems, and this one i can really relate to-really nicely done. keep writing-i'd love to read more. |
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Re: My own little hell.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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I may not be a member here, but i read many
dark and suicide poems, and this one i can really relate to-really nicely done. keep writing-i'd love to read more. |
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Re: My own little hell.
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:44:49 PM AEST
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| Pretty twisted.... but REALLY good. I feel that way sometimes. Hope to read more from you! Keep it up! |
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