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Sea of Black
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:39:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Screaming in my sea of black,
I'm oozing shades of grey.
Then running, stumbling,
blinded now,
I'm lost, I don't know where
I'm going
mad
Hair of chartreuse,
out of reach,
out of reach
Oh how I dare to open my eyes...
Oh God! This light, this
...pain...
I cower, underneath these trees
of bright amethyst surround,
cliffs of brilliant cerulean,
overwhelm
overwhelm
Now racing, tripping, unaware,
over rocks of chocolate brown,
No sacrilege of opened eyes...
Back to my dark, so wondrous,
cherished charcoal I despise
Then,
A slant misstep,
fragmented ankle,
bone revealed.
My opened eyes now see my sea
now not so far away.
However, lying here,
beside myself,
next to me I see my corpse...
I crawl to me,
push putrid rotting entrails aside.
Decaying skin to cover life,
shaking cold, I crawl inside...
So as my sea of black slips in
to lick my festered lips,
under dripping carmine sky,
Moonlit eyes of vermilion
calling,
Come; Try
Come; Try,
once again
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Re: Sea of Black
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:43:39 PM AEST
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| This is a great write! Keep the poems coming hun! |
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Re: Sea of Black
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by kailadragon on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:44:59 PM AEST
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| wow that poem was REALLY awesome.......i liked it.. |
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Re: Sea of Black
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:18:55 PM AEST
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| I could picture an insomniac writing this. It was dark and it was excellent! Kie |
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Re: Sea of Black
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:20:29 PM AEST
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dude this was awesome yer best in a while I think... I loved the image of your crawling to your corpse that was *****in great. Sorry for tripped out on yeah last nite...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Sea of Black
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:14:20 PM AEST
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| this has to be one of my favourites of yours. sometimes i wish i could write poetry as good as this. keep it up! luv phil xxx |
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Re: Sea of Black
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 04:54:48 AM AEST
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| That was excellent! Kinda reminds me of a Nightwish song. I loved the dark, "come to me in the dark" atmosphere. |
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