|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Eternity
Contributed by
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
I don't know just what to do
when I feel so blue.
I always used to think of you;
the love I thought was true.
I used to think I'd see the sun,
and someday, we would have such fun.
I knew our time had just begun,
and now, it seems like we are done.
I still just don't know why
you like to hear me cry.
Like the clouds that fill the sky,
my love for you will never die.
Soon you will come back for me,
and I will tell you what I see.
I see a man so scared and weak
who can't give me the love I seek.
You are the only man I love
sent to me from up above.
Someday soon, I know you'll see
the one you truly love is me.
`*`
Copyright ©
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
... [
2004-02-20 14:09:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Eternity
(User Rating: 1 )
by antares on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:36:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i really loved this poem! i am living this right now and can relate one hundred percent. i feel your pain..check out some of my poems and tell me what u think. i like yours a lot!~antares |
|
|
Re: Eternity
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:14:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Well said! Kie |
|
|
Re: Eternity
(User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:56:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| true, eternity is a long time, but so is life. Everyone says it's so short when yet it's up to us how long we last. Good write. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
