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The Metaphysical He
Contributed by
norm
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:07:50 AM in AEST
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I wonder if you question why
The moon and sun are in the sky,
The great expanse, the stars that dance
Can all be seen by naked eye.
The earth does turn and stops the burn
Of gaseous sun while earth has spun,
And night and day comes out to play,
And we are happy, so they say.
It regulates our daily lives,
We wait for night to love our wives,
We wait for day to use the heat,
To earn our bread so we can eat.
We kind of know it's very large,
We kind of know someone's in charge,
We can't conceive it runs alone,
Someone has to take the phone.
And call we do as some attest,
And we are answered, ne'er in gest,
And few will doubt if needs be theres
A super being makes repairs.
Names don't matter, He's for all,
The short and fat, the lean and tall,
You're no better, you're no worse,
He's to use until the hearse.
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norm
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Arius-Inues on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:15:21 AM AEST
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| firstly i would like to sav its harder to be a witch but thats beside the point, anywho its very well written. |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Stitch on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 11:07:49 AM AEST
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Fabulous! Norm, I really appreciate your stuff. You have such a way with words and always run your point home!
Stitch |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 11:12:35 AM AEST
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Creation is a might task
Our choices are free we just ask
And something keeps the world revolving
And it ever seems to be evolving
Somehow things adjust
Because of man the earth must
We destroy all in our path
And leave it to the Creator to fix the atfermath
Shari
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Melissa on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 11:36:22 AM AEST
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| I really like this, you seem to make the point that there is a God without screaming the point. Even if I wasn't Born-Again I would have started to rethink my faith at least. |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:52:58 PM AEST
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| A very interesting poem. You make a strong point. Kie |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:48:49 PM AEST
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| Highly enjoyable. Very well thought out. |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:15:07 PM AEST
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Some do rant and curse,
but to me, He is my universe.
Rita |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:22:44 PM AEST
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Dear Norm,
I always admire your logic. without logic there can be no truth! This is an excellent write Norm......in every respect of the word, and the subject of the poem.
This is a different write for you i know....you did a marvelous job in my book......how can you not see, all you have to do is take a good look!
Bravo for you, well done my friend!
as always
consue
P.S. Shari's poem was excellent too! |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by EternitysLyre on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 06:02:47 AM AEST
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This poem is undeniably good, but why is the omnipotent, omniscient creator a he?
"Everyday the sun gives way to daunting summer moons; Some will say the heart betrays a haunting drummer's tune."
~The Palatine Poet |
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Re: The Metaphysical He
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by Kittenfantastico on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:50:58 AM AEST
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Well done, I see "him" as a "her" the goddess.
this is very good. |
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