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Emotions got the Best
Contributed by
icryblacktearz
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:57:57 AM in AEST
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there are times when i can't cry,
my eyes are nothing but dry,
there is no emotion that has power over me,
and for thats how its going to be,
i can't look past your face,
as if it were memorises im doomed to retrace,
i sit here with nothing on my heart,
for you are what i called my sweet heart,
I can't go on a day with out my mind going a stray,
this is seems to be my repay,
I never ment to break your heart,
or leave you feeling torn apart,
but my emotions got the best of me,
for this i know you do agree,
if i could take back what i do best,
i would put myself to enturnal rest,
so here is my letter of love,
i'll be looking down from above,
wish i was that one,
that has your arms to fall in,
but i cant,
so i chant... i love you!
Copyright ©
icryblacktearz
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2004-02-20 09:57:57]
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Re: Emotions got the Best
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by Arius-Inues on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:04:26 AM AEST
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| omg i love this poem! very well writen and i could see threw your eyes. keep it up! |
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Re: Emotions got the Best
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 11:05:06 AM AEST
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such a brilliant poem
good job |
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Re: Emotions got the Best
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:38:14 PM AEST
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| Embedded with sadness. Touched me deeply. Really is a brilliant write. Kie |
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Re: Emotions got the Best
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:28:19 PM AEST
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Beautiful :o)
Larry |
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