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Sapphire Star
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:53:51 AM in AEST
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Today caught a bus stood in the pouring rain
Soaked by a passing car drove me insane
Did not have the right change driver got mad
No seats had to stand all the way so sad
See my love has been stolen it is only a car
I loved it such much flair, called it sapphire star
The criminals liked it and took it away for fun
My baby star gone the nightmares just begun
Salesmen are fickle so have to beware
I don't believe what I hear, do they care
Fantastic body work what a smooth ride
Smooth talker are his words bona fide
His words are passionate about its elegant splendour
But his dirty hands have caressed many a fender.
He knows it has faults he just wants to sell
Give me your money sign and say farewell
Full service history is a must superb condition
Raring to go on this search and rescue mission
So fingers crossed and please wish me luck
Don't want to be left waiting in the rain like a duck
(They even stole my fluffy rabbit on the dashboard)
Yet to christen our replacement car
Copyright ©
sweetangeluk
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2004-02-20 07:53:51]
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 08:28:59 AM AEST
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That's a sad tale of GTA, and no mistake!
I think it would be best not to get too attached to your replacement car - a name like 'fourwheels', would be sufficient for the likes of me - but then again, I'm never really that good with names!
Good Job. |
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:38:25 PM AEST
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| This one made me smile. Filled with a cheeky humor and this is you as you shine! Awesome write and I am tempted to say this is my new favorite by you. I LOVED this one so much! From the title to the ending you have outdone yourself. Kie |
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 07:54:44 PM AEST
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lmao...perfect
very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by skinsfan on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:16:33 AM AEST
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| You have a way with words and a great imagination. Nice job-skinsfan |
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:25:54 PM AEST
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| I can relate to your story on many levels. I once had a keyboard the first week i had it some one stole it. The good news is a close friend who knew I wrote music gave me his and made me promise to not let the bad incident stop me from using my talent. |
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 02:42:36 PM AEST
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This gave me a laugh, especially that Angel-type ending...hehe! Good stuff. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Scorp. |
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Re: Sapphire Star
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by Nonefound on
Monday, 27th June 2011 @ 06:04:59 PM AEST
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| like that poem, it is really good. |
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