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Outcast
Contributed by
blueheart
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Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:37:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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The pretence smiles they give to you,
It lasts a while, then it is due,
It hardly stays and I'm not surprised,
I wish I trusted with just my eyes.
At first it seemed the bond was sealed,
And all my doubts and fears were healed,
But once again it falls apart,
Too bad I trusted with my heart.
The enter with grace yet easily leave,
And scatter like leaves beneath the oak tree,
The pain, it sears after infinite tries,
I should have trusted with just my eyes.
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blueheart
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Re: Outcast
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:55:31 AM AEST
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Very good writing. I can relate.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for your awesome comments on my work. |
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Re: Outcast
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 06:17:44 AM AEST
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Oh Blueheart what you say is so true.
For these days are filled with not love but hate.
No one can be trusted when it comes to a
trustworthy friend.....unless you've known them for a long time.
I know what you mean.....it's happened to me in with my family!
But don't give us....we here at YPDC will be
your friend......to the end!
lovingcritters
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Re: Outcast
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:32:45 PM AEST
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Excellent poetry!! I wish you posted more often :o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Outcast
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:54:14 AM AEST
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| a very great write...i can relate to this, good job |
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Re: Outcast
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 09:41:45 AM AEST
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dearest hanna, this is so true... beautifully written, may your ink always flow, may you always have a warm smile and poem in your heart, please keep writing, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Outcast
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:42:06 AM AEST
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| I feel you. I can absolutely relate to this, you mapped and wrote it out brilliantly and with so much depth. I salute you. |
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Re: Outcast
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:05:53 PM AEST
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| Yup. That's my life. Sums it up VERY beautifully! I loved your poem, it described things very well. Good job Blueheart! |
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Re: Outcast
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:51:23 AM AEST
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Excellent! This is very well done. I like your rhyming. Very worthy poem.
Andrew |
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Re: Outcast
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:03:20 AM AEST
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Sad but very powerfull!
I know the feeling well.
Your unique talent shines in this write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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