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For Eric, Part One
Contributed by
Blu
on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:00:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On gossamer wings did you come,
my angel, my Raphael.
Twilight to my dawn,
cry to my silence.
With whispers of love
and promises of eternity
I tasted your sweet nectar.
You bathed me in honey
and fed me with lotus petals.
Let us fly over this unformed land,
let us dance and sing
at the tables of gods.
Let our creations be as gifts
to this world.
Let us raise a new Eden.
And you will forever be
laughter to my tears,
sun to my moon.
My angel, my Raphael.
Copyright ©
Blu
... [
2004-02-19 22:00:18]
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Re: For Eric, Part One
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by antares on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:38:10 PM AEST
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| wow. i really liked your poem a lot. i haven't read an uplifting poem like this in a while. it always makes me smile to see a poem written as u wrote this one full of beautiful imagery. i am so happy u have someone that can fuel u to write like this. cant wait to read the next two. check out some of mine and let me know what u think.~antares |
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Re: For Eric, Part One
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by jbrow on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 05:40:30 PM AEST
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| very good I like this alot |
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