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Love: Now Free!
Contributed by
antares
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love is such a tortured word,
the essence of it butchered.
Thrown about with disregard,
no concept of its worth.
The zenith of emotion,
no others so supreme,
yet given out so carelessly,
like its manufactured by machines.
So next time your at the store,
Grab a handful of love, its free!
Its ok to waste and throw about,
All your hurting is me!
Copyright ©
antares
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2004-02-19 21:22:03]
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Re: Love: Now Free!
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by burdened on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:24:25 PM AEST
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that is so true.
awesome write. |
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Re: Love: Now Free!
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by Kie on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 12:16:19 AM AEST
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| I can't imagine it being said any better. Great poem... Kie |
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Re: Love: Now Free!
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by MajesticPoet on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 02:34:03 AM AEST
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Awsome write bro. Sweet and to the point. I love it. Funny how we are told love is good when we are young. Then we come to find out it is so hurtful. Nice one, keep them coming.
Majestic
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Re: Love: Now Free!
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:13:45 AM AEST
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| very, very true. i can relate. great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Love: Now Free!
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:25:12 PM AEST
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Very well said. And too true. It's always painful to see how abused is love.
Beautiful words. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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Re: Love: Now Free!
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:51:41 PM AEST
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| This was wonderful! And so true! |
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